Last night i see a dream that i am a knight and i go with my sword an my shild and i fight with my suit of armor and my bow to protect the queen and the king.
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Bravo Mike but don’t forget past simple!!!
Your composition has a few grammar and tense issues that could be improved:
“Last night i see a dream” – Here, the correct past tense form of “see” should be used, which is “saw”. So it should be “Last night I saw a dream”.
“that i am a knight” – This part is fine grammatically, but for smoother flow, you could say “that I was a knight”.
“and i go with my sword an my shild” – “and I go” should be “and I went” to match the past tense. “An” should be “and”, and “shild” should be “shield”. So it would be “and I went with my sword and my shield”.
“and i fight with my suit of armor and my bow” – This part is fine, but for consistency with the previous tense changes, it should be “and I fought with my suit of armor and my bow”.
“to protect the queen and the king” – This part is correct.
So, a corrected version could be:
“Last night I saw a dream that I was a knight. I went with my sword and my shield, and I fought with my suit of armor and my bow to protect the queen and the king.”
Overall, your composition conveys a clear story, but with these corrections, it will sound smoother and more grammatically accurate. Keep up the good work!